Mr. Everyone

I'd have to agree with her^

When I want to write a poem I think to myself, " I need some class A inspiration, eh... ill settle for a C." After I have that down, I ...

=) I like the little piece of work you have, and i have to agree with groink, it would be so much better to personalize it a bit with a ...

I like it. probably because im a sucker for most nature. hehe I love how the five stanzas are aligned with the forms of the day and night and the ...

The end rhyme...last lign, was kind of a shock and throws off the fealing a bit, but besides that very well done, congradulations I love your choice of words and ...

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I don't think I agree with your lign breaks, especially at the beginning of the poem... And the last two ligns don't end well with the syllabolic rythm going atleast, ...

lol serenityinthesky i love your quote

=) I think you put them together nicely, saying that when i don't quite like the song, but thats my opinion. Congradulations =) keep writing and =) happy reading (=

welcome to yws=) lol i found your poem most ammusing. as if all of us can not relate to this hahahaha. Actually i think your form of repetition there starts ...

And, you guys can just call me, Everyone! =)

Hello: Well it's true, I'm a noob. Just started yestirday, I think, hopefully. I'm what you could call weird. Sort of a skater/mmorpg freak/writer/chick magnet. lol... I wish. Well anyways ...

welcome sokool 15 =) grats on being alive hope you fit in here, if you have any questions if i were u i wouldnt ask me im sorta newbie here ...

welcome Unrecompensed, hope u figure it all out here, congrats on being a live and if you have anyquestions u should ask some1 else for help im a newbie lol. ...

Hey Aine, although I refer meat, nice to meet you. I hope you fit in here, im kinda a newbie too lol. We'll congradulations on ....hmm...... well grats to being ...